Off-The-Grid COMET models

Hello! I've been working up some 3D models (using SketchUp) of the COMET as she may end up, or the "end result" models. These are likely to change as the design process continues and ideas solidify, but here was what I first envisioned The COMET to look like. Perhaps the rainwater harvesting system will change, and the solar modules might be in different places or as a separate array that pops up and can move around in order to collect optimum sun, but here's my totally self-contained version of The COMET of the future.

panels model
panels model
bumper garden
bumper garden

Also, here's one version of an "info sheet" that explains the COMET in a more comprehensive way.

COMET INFO SHEET concept
COMET INFO SHEET concept

What do you think? Is there anything else that a comprehensive info sheet about the project should include? I need some feedback!